My story is going to be about a high school boy and girl, mum, dad and grandma and grandpa and the kids and mum and dad go visited grandma & grandpa for the holidays because grandma is very sick because she has a bad bug and grandpa is very sad about it all and they live in Rio de janeiro and when they are there they find that there is a lot of pollution in the sea and there are lots of sea animals dyeing.
If you what to here more on the story here is my plan.
So I hope you like my plan and my story that I will be writing
Do you like writing?
But that is all for this week's blog good
BYE
Hi Mia, I really liked your plan for the story it seems like a really interesting story. I'm really excited to read it. Maybe the sea animal could be a dolphin or a turtle or something else. Bye.
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ReplyDeleteHi Mia, I really like how you have added a DLO to your Blog Post. It’s really catchy and caught my eye really well. Next time you could proof read the Blog Post to make sure there is punctuation added and in the right place. Also that it makes sense. When I read your post, I learnt all about what your story is going to be about and some really cool facts about it. How come you chose this story? Did something inspire you?
-Hannah S (SFOA)